With some corrections......

女儿和她同学（6年级）及偶对总统选举结果的反应

J has been my daughter 's best friend for a few years now. she is a 大家闺秀 kind of girl. Now they are home work buddy, both are in the advanced math and English classes. They either do homework together or discuss it on speaker phone.

we live at a republicAN neighborhood. her family are die heart (你想说die-hard, 对吗？) Republicans. J is a pretty girl, each time boy want her attention , just by chanting " Obama, Obama", 她睬都不睬， 心想： 走着瞧。

yesterday, the election result came out, my daughter said : J must be very upset, I am going to call her and comfort her.

偶听到speaker phone 传出阵阵鬼哭狼嚎，真的不夸张。J falled from her chair to the floor and said her life is over.

when I grow older, I become more Conservative, I voted for Romney, so did my daughter . how up set is she ?  She was playing her new game , no stopping.

I delivered a nonsense comments about the election. I am upset too.

My hu*****and ( voted for Obama) 凑过来说： 你看这样，偶们搬到犹他州， Romney 的 老家去好不好。

I kicked his butt.

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• good job. -ily- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/07/2012 postreply 13:12:24

• my version - Just for fun, and critiques are strongly welcomed! -Madrigal- ♀ (19520 bytes) () 11/07/2012 postreply 14:43:21

• Thank you 4 the explanation! -wantno3- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/07/2012 postreply 15:22:58