她的作文(common app), 我当时家里有急事回中国,等我看到时她刚寄出去,应该还可以更好,很多英文单词我不认识,大意是她回中国看到农村人在艰苦的条件下和大自然搏斗的精神,以及奶奶和死神的搏斗,让她对她所服务养老院的病人工作的价值有更好的认识,也激励她对学习及将来的工作更加努力。结尾的这这样的,
I never expected to gain so much from what appeared to be a simple vacation or a simple visit to the nursing home. Even today, the lessons I received from my grandmother and the villagers closely influence my decisions, and I know they will continue to motivate my growth. I continue to choose the wild, twisting trail when presented with a choice because despite the various difficulties faced along the way I will emerge elevated by my triumphs.
当我面临选择的时候,我依然会走上那条原始的曲折的道路,我知道在我面前伴随着无数的困难,但我将会举起胜利的奖杯。