第一次发现女儿有写作天赋的一首诗

女儿六年级写的一首竞赛诗，投出去后没想到拿到了第一名Grand Prize和奖金，全家人都非常开心。投稿前我们都没怎么看，获奖后Google一翻译，才发现诗的意境和内容都很不错，后来还发现每对句子后面一个字还押韵。

Uncovering The World

Water rippling by the willow trees,
The steady hum of the bees.

The sweet smell of pureness hard to resist,
A light, cool spray of morning mist.

A red fox slinking into the shade,
The warm sunset starting to fade.

Bright laughter helps the dawn break,
Followed by many others, happiness awakes.

Just a smile, holding of hands,
Brings humans together, in a chain we stand.

The deep blue sky dotted with stars,
Who knew this wouldn’t go far?

The sour smell of gas,
Traffic pushing to get past.

Starving children covered in tears,
The air heavy and tense from so many fears.

The murky water making a silent splash,
Filled with oil and filthy trash.

The sorrow, the disbelief, the lies,
In this world happiness isn’t something you can buy.

But just when this world is at its brink,
Things finally start to link.

New things invented, new things found,
The world has eventually turned around.

Some things lost forever, but some things great,
It all comes back, only a little late.

The humans have shaped this world, again and again,
The world will never stop changing, and neither will men.

This is the world as I see it,
And I'm ready to uncover it bit by bit.

我眼中的世界 （Google 翻译）

看见柳树边的水面上微微泛起着涟漪
听见蜜蜂持续的嗡嗡声

纯纯的甜香很难抵抗
一缕早晨明亮的薄雾冷冷的喷洒在大地

一只红狐狸偷偷摸摸的消失在阴影中
温暖的日落开始慢慢褪色

明亮的笑声让天变亮了
笑声一个接一个，幸福的人们起来了

一个微笑，手牵着手，
人们站在一排，连在一起

星星点缀着深蓝的天空
谁知道这美好的世界会走多远？

我闻到了污浊的空气的味道
我看到了人们争先恐后拥挤着穿过

我看到了饥饿的孩子眼泪迷住了眼睛
我看到了人们的恐惧使空气弥漫着凝重和紧张

我看见了无声的溅起黑水
充满了油腻和污秽的垃圾

伤心，怀疑，谎言
这个世界上快乐是买不到的

但是，当这个世界到达它的边缘的时候
事情终于开始联系起来

新的东西被发明了，新的东西被发现了
世界终于改变了

一些东西永远的失去了，一些东西很伟大
世界又有生机了，尽管有一些晚

人们已经在改变这个世界，而且不断不断地改变
世界不会停止被改变，人类也不会

这就是我眼中的世界
而我已经准备好了一点一点的揭示它