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来源: 2018-10-03 18:25:10 [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 本文已被阅读:

The Old Willow Tree

The blazing sun was setting over the cornfield. I knew that the sun could not reach me from under the old willow tree. It protected me from the sun and made me feel less lonely. Sure, Tamarin was here and Sylvia was here, but being with the willow tree made me feel safe. I know I can't prevent the old willow tree from rotting but I wish I could. Soon the willow tree died and all of the animals could not be protected from the sun. I am lonely now, oh so lonely. 
Sylvia bounded over to me with a small seed in her paws. "Look!look!" Sylvia cried."what is it?" I wondered aloud. " it's a willow seed!" She dug a hole in the ground and planted it. 
Soon the willow seed grew and all of the animals were happy!" Hurrah " they yelled!"Hurrah " and that's the End.