分析一下这句:
要求把 “My best friend is a nice person.” 改写成有意思的话。
结果这句话被改写成:
“My loyal best extraordinary amazing friend is unbelievably kind. ”
loyal, best, extraordinary, amazing 等词基本上同义重复,胡乱堆砌在一起,读起来显得拖泥带水、不堪凌乱。
best 一词足以概括 loyal, extraordinary, amazing 等等, precise and concise。
结果这句话被改写成:
“My loyal best extraordinary amazing friend is unbelievably kind. ”
loyal, best, extraordinary, amazing 等词基本上同义重复,胡乱堆砌在一起,读起来显得拖泥带水、不堪凌乱。
best 一词足以概括 loyal, extraordinary, amazing 等等, precise and concise。