看看这样翻译如何?

来源: 2010-01-04 02:41:29 [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 本文已被阅读:

要有诗词的押韵,不一定要直译:

God grant me the serenity
To accept the things I cannot change;
Courage to change the things I can;
And wisdom to know the difference.

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对既成事实不翻案,
力所能及的要果断,
鲁莽行事让人心酸.