Like this topic and your translation very much...

来源: 2013-05-03 12:57:48 [博客] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 本文已被阅读:

sweetened words -> sugar coated words?

maybe use "compliment" to replace "praise" at some places to avoid repetitive use of one word?

BTW, is 中文 your 原创? great essay!