A few small things (did not read the original Chinese text)

1. long and tilted eyes - slanted eyes

2. feeling detached to their faces - feeling detached from their faces

3. I never date - I have never dated

4. I never try to work hard - I have never tried

5. yellow outside but white inside - yellow on the outside but white on the inside

6. differentiate one face from others - differentiate one face from another

7. at an aimless glance at myself - at a glympse of myself (not sure)