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- to get something for free -> getting something for free (not sure)

Both are fine. I don’t think there is much difference in meaning.

http://www.sonnerct.com/English_Rules/LR10_Gerunds_Infinitives.htm#300

- double bouble -> typo?

Typo.

- small words -> fine print

Agree, “fine print” is much better.

- I used flawless English made the order -> used flawlee English to make

Agree.

- It was a Sunday morning, I set off -> it was a sunday morning, and I set off

Agree, need an “and” there.

- Tim Hortons or the Tim Hortons?

Normally, Tim Hortons as a band does not need “the”, unless I am referring to a particular location.