这个加州游行程怎么样？

两个大人,两个小孩,7岁4岁. d1 (Friday) fly to lax, live in la d2 universal studio live in la d3 Beverly Hills, kodak theater, star way, santa monica, live in la d4 meet friends,? then drive to sf by either 5 or 101, live in sf d5 golden gate, fishermen's pier, cable car, china town, financial district, live in sf d6 stanford and Berkeley, meet friends, live in sf d7 - july 4th, big sur, carmel, road 1 trip, live in santa babara, anywhere we can see fireworks on that day? d8 long beach, Newport beach, la Jolla beach, live in sd d9 back to la, return flight is at 8pm, pretty open except need to reserve some time for Chinatown shopping any suggestions??

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• 你的英文令人费解，如果中文比英文好还是用中文吧。一些phrases 的堆砌不帮提高英语表达。 -河滨- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/21/2013 postreply 05:59:38

• 同意楼上，而且分段的话更容易让别人看清楚。住旅馆用"stay" instead of "live". -chocolatecherry- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/21/2013 postreply 07:34:31

• 好象有点松散 -gulala- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/21/2013 postreply 20:32:27

• 第七天如果只开车走1号公路没问题。。。 -fisherman99- ♂ (357 bytes) () 06/22/2013 postreply 20:43:18

• 跟我的差不多，我的搬到英文区了，fatwallet.com/forums/travel-discussion/1442838/ -iceox- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/06/2015 postreply 18:04:56