这翻译好，保持了原诗的诗意盎然！第二句很优美。相比之下，我写的就是大白话啊

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Even if my hair on the temples is as grey as frost, my heart is still as clear as the bright moon in front of this world。 

 

大白话版：愿你出走半生，归来仍是少年