这是关于一首现代诗的讨论挺有意思的这首有点像田纳西的馅饼虽然英文更有名

This Is Just To Say

William Carlos Williams

 

I have eaten
the plums
that were in
the icebox

and which
you were probably
saving
for breakfast

Forgive me
they were delicious
so sweet
and so cold

 

Miley - woooooooooooow8 days ago 

Miley - icebox whats that8 days ago 

Bud Cole - I find nothing artful, poetic, nor entertaining in this 'poem' and view it as an insult to the works of such as Wordsworth, and other masters.a month ago 

Drog - You are wrong. Wordsworth understood the immediate and understood how important it is to capture the moment.16 days ago 

Bud Cole - Drog,
    Regarding the above response you issued: Would you offhandedly deny me my opinion? And, it seems you refer to Wordsworth as an offender in my dislike;
Drog, my displeasure lies within the realm of 'modernism' as a genre of 'poetry.'
Williams and others like him is the culprit here, not the old and time proven, masters.16 days ago 

Skyautumn51 - one of my favorite poems ever. his wife's reply is also priceless.a month ago 

Liedekev - Great job doc2 months ago 

Avarshinahchol - forgive yourself and walk away2 months ago 

Dreamerpoet - I really like this piece. Thanks for sharing!

Enjoyable2 months ago 

Christopher Wry - Cute write hope they do2 months ago 

Imago Dei - Well crafted piece just to say.

Great2 months ago 

Jferry - Haven't we all done something like this? A wonderful, witty little poem. Not a word more needed, and not a word out of place.

Great