谢谢尘凡。帮我看下小说，提些建议。本来想追求些结构变化在短篇幅内，但觉得传统叙述比较顺畅，感觉舒服。

来源: applebee3 于 2019-02-15 15:25:19 [博客] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 本文已被阅读：次

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