请教，这首诗的哪句，很中国，或文法错误？OK，请你改全诗成美国人写的对文法。。。。。。。

来源: lovecat08 于 2023-06-10 06:47:35 [博客] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 本文已被阅读：次

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