挺好的一首平水韵七绝。不怕用窄韵，点题而不留痕，末句馀味无穷。古典诗歌后继有人。将来阅历更深，诗必更耐品。

来源: LYJiang 于 2023-05-24 19:17:39 [博客] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 本文已被阅读：次

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