我试了一下第二首

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不太满意。下面一长一短两个版本是我儿子的尝试,他上中文课学过第二首。

(一)

Somnolent feelings on this Spring early morning

without my knowing, the dawn is coming

I hear the entrancing song of birds

Reverberating through the skies, from nearby and from afar, 

And from outside I heard 

the sounds of howling winds and rains last night, 

and still I lie in sleep, 

wondering how many flowers are lying 

on the ground beneath the tree this morning

 

(二)

 

Still asleep, in Spring, the dawns come without my knowing

The song of birds from near and afar is echoing

Sounds of howling winds and cutting rains I heard last night

Still in bed, though it’s long turned bright,

Wondering how many petals lay beneath the old tree this morning.