我觉得我写得好有气势！唯一美中不足的是：第3句，用了两个恩，想不出别的，诗句重复用字可以吗？

来源: 云霞姐姐于 2026-05-04 18:58:46 [博客] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 本文已被阅读：次

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