风好入堂不觉寒 (原句:好风入画不觉寒)
水天流盼润眸软
恍然怜眷影双圆
细语依稀暖春浅
注:为符合原画作的平水韵,斗胆把童心诗的原句改了一下。
风好入堂不觉寒 (原句:好风入画不觉寒)
水天流盼润眸软
恍然怜眷影双圆
细语依稀暖春浅
注:为符合原画作的平水韵,斗胆把童心诗的原句改了一下。
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来君好文采!接得自然又贴画,韵脚一转更添几分清润。佩服!您的字一落,夏意都被写得更鲜了。:)
-老林子里的夏天-
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