我觉得实事求是也可以写得更抢眼些, 比如老阎PNAS这篇文章:
摘要最后可以写:
Our studies provide structural evidence for a glucose intake mechanism by transporters consistent with the allosteric model.
摘要最后可以写:
Our studies provide structural evidence for a glucose intake mechanism by transporters consistent with the allosteric model.