暮色微茫情陷,洗血旧仇新蘸。寒刃白衣翻,尽挑平生一剑。
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暮色微茫情陷,洗血旧仇新蘸。寒刃白衣翻,尽挑平生一剑。
无欠,无欠,月冷孤城独站。
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尽挑平生一剑~~~ Very sharp! Like it!~~ 问好!
-遍野-
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04/29/2025 postreply
18:16:34
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哈哈,问好遍野!全去声的韵脚,有点杀伐之气。:)
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04/29/2025 postreply
18:24:03
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哈哈,是哈~~ 不过你用词/字非常精准~~~~ 喜欢!
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04/29/2025 postreply
18:26:26
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哈哈,囫囵凑的,谢谢鼓励!:)
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04/30/2025 postreply
05:20:05
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孤城独站,酷
-秦照-
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04/29/2025 postreply
19:03:56
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快意恩仇的尽头,是荒芜~~~~问好秦照诗友!
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04/30/2025 postreply
05:13:49
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女侠一枚!
-方外居士-
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04/29/2025 postreply
20:14:32
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为了凑这几个韵脚,入了趟江湖~~~~问好居士兄!
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04/30/2025 postreply
05:14:59
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谢谢朱先生临读鼓励,问好!
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04/30/2025 postreply
05:21:27
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寒刃白衣翻,尽挑平生一剑。
-闲杂人员-
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04/30/2025 postreply
07:56:19
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谢谢闲人君雅临摘句鼓励,问好!
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05/01/2025 postreply
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