《江城子:仙凡交界燕来声》

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龙谱双调苏轼体 *
词林正韵第十一部平声

 

 

仙凡交界燕来声,
绕江城,动天庭。
绝唱云间,尘外一诗灵,
与我同飞何处去?
春竹畔,古兰亭。

流觞曲水说浮生,
失峥嵘,得娉婷。
眼底神州,心底祝升平,
许我炎黄新一梦,
星雨夜,月乡晴。


作者:纫秋兰


中平中仄仄平平。
仄平平,仄平平。
中仄平平,中仄仄平平。
中仄中平平仄仄,
平仄仄,仄平平。

中平中仄仄平平。
仄平平,仄平平。
中仄平平,中仄仄平平。
中仄中平平仄仄,
平仄仄,仄平平。

……

蓝灵诗友英语小诗高挂共赏:

Being hit
With a rain shower,
The solar panels cry
Atop a city tower.


renqiulan (纫秋兰):

Lan Ling (Blue Soul) graced my post with the above catchy ditty, to which I responded with a light-hearted prose as follows:

In Solaria, the city planners had a brilliant idea. They decided to cover every rooftop with state-of-the-art solar panels to harness every last ray of sunshine. This was heralded as a groundbreaking step toward a greener future. However, in their excitement, they overlooked a crucial detail: Solaria wasn't exactly a sun city. Its residents had to brave the elements practically every single day. No wonder all the solar panels were crying in the rain.