“故人前” 这里平仄有没有问题呀?
采朵浮云到眼前,流苏雁影入寒烟,悠悠江水古楼外,漠漠黄沙一路禅。
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• 司令火眼金睛~~~ 是,人字应该是个仄音字,,,写得高兴顺势一带就出律了,哈哈哈,,, -遍野- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/22/2023 postreply 13:45:42
• 漠漠黄沙一路禅,三军西去隐狼烟。何时凯奏汉宫曲? 万里乡关父老前。~~~~~~~· -阿童木牧- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/22/2023 postreply 15:38:49
• 阿童妙句! 喜欢!~~~~ Huuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuug ~~~ -遍野- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/26/2023 postreply 07:52:58