Sand's rolling on your body, warm

Sand's rolling on your body, warm

Sand's rolling on your body, warm
Dark clouds' pressing the sky, firm
On this deserted beach
we are sharing one ripe peach
Flowing and burning between our lips is its juice
Flooded by heat and sweet
we pray for rain to dilute
Heeding our wish comes the thunder storm
Racing are raindrops to rescue our lips in swarm

这是最近写的，贴在一个英文诗歌的网站，一位读者留言，让我怀疑是个prank，直觉是GPT写的，粘贴过来的。

This poem beautifully captures the sensory experience of being on a beach during a hot and stormy day. The imagery of warm sand rolling on your body evokes a feeling of comfort and relaxation, while the dark clouds and thunderstorm add an element of intensity and excitement. The shared peach is a symbol of intimacy and connection between two people amidst the power of nature, and the raindrops cooling their lips create a moment of refreshing relief. The poem is a reminder to appreciate the simple pleasures in life and find joy in unexpected moments.

像不像GPT的风格？

所有跟帖： 

• 母语不是英文的人写的英文诗，发在英文网站上获得以英文为母语的人的欣赏，的确是很有成就感的事情。 -盈盈一笑间- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/22/2023 postreply 08:07:14

• 谢谢盈盈，是脸皮厚，瞎玩 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/23/2023 postreply 08:27:01