七律 * 抒怀（附英译）

《七律 • 抒怀》
作者  一苇北渡

惯经世上尘嚣土，笑语悲声悔迟悟。
曾喜天涯任放歌，那知江海多迷雾。
半生冷暖好圆融，百岁功名难建树。
历遍浮沉方会心，一身风雨一诗赋。

～～～顺口溜英译，供一笑～～～
‘The Truth of Life’ 
by Yi Wei Bei Du

Roaming through this mortal realm, I've journeyed far and wide.
Encountered both joy and pain, I'm still seeking life's elusive guide.

The thrill of boundless exploration is hard to keep,
And life's rugged terrain proves rough and steep.

I've learned to embrace the obstacles and hypocrisy on my way,
And realized that the glory is like the flutter of a butterfly's wings.

Through life's ebbs and flows, my heart has gained insight,
Finding beauty in every step, as if reading verses I write.

所有跟帖： 

• 仄韵有律诗一说吗？我不懂瞎聊天。中英文都不错 -作业本- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/29/2023 postreply 14:31:58

• “近体诗以平韵为正例，仄韵非常罕见。仄韵律诗很像古风。”——王力《汉语诗律学》 -一苇北渡- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/30/2023 postreply 08:36:55

• 如果不合近体只合古风，也不必勉强称其为仄韵七律（绝）了。好的古体，一样脍炙人口，又不受格式诟病。 -惜也- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/01/2023 postreply 05:53:17

• 笑语悲声迟悔悟 -江南水彩- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/03/2023 postreply 10:58:21