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万里烟云万里愁
黄昏细雨念无休
一行白鹭飞檐过
魂断故洲梦旧游
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万里烟云万里愁
黄昏细雨念无休
一行白鹭飞檐过
魂断故洲梦旧游
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"七言诗一首"吧,肯定不是绝句。
-惜也-
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07/20/2022 postreply
09:26:16
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你要是明白什么是“七言绝句”,就说说为什么这个不是,行吗?
-大山晨光-
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07/20/2022 postreply
22:13:09
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会不会是因为您用了平仄通押呢?
-白九-
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07/21/2022 postreply
06:37:04
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"搜韵"如是说。(举手之劳而已)
-惜也-
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07/22/2022 postreply
10:04:40
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谢谢提平仄误处,并分享"搜韵"工具;现把原诗修改成七绝如下:
-大山晨光-
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07/23/2022 postreply
10:29:27
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