颔联合掌嫌疑颇重,感觉上。
更喜欢三四联。
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不错,颔联出句对句的确都是咏一物。但是,君不闻"生南为橘生北为枳"?我的两句是以丝瓜苗在异国和家乡的不同状态/待遇为对比,虚虚实
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05/28/2021 postreply
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虚虚实实地抒发一些感慨。
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