欣赏,问好山水兄! 拙见: 末句 稚孙相与同乐, 何如?
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• 谢武兄临赏,问好!相与也曾考虑,但思过具参与味,小孩子非能饮酒吟诗,只会依怀撒娇胡闹也。与吾则有违平仄,故倒装之。:)见笑! -山水苍茫- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/31/2021 postreply 08:20:03
• 谢武兄临赏,问好!相与也曾考虑,但思过具参与味,小孩子非能饮酒吟诗,只会依怀撒娇胡闹也。与吾则有违平仄,故倒装之。:)见笑! -山水苍茫- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/31/2021 postreply 08:20:03
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