心迹若摇梭, 果然空自多。 本来描现状, 终究见淆讹。
~~本来是描述诗坛现状, 您若不喜欢那些, 美安可删掉。~~
~~本来是描述诗坛现状, 您若不喜欢那些, 美安可删掉。~~
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这首呢,把徒然自作情改成"果然空自多"就会顺畅很多,不过整首就要换成五多韵。
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心迹若摇梭, 果然空自多。 本来描现状, 终究见淆讹。
-Meander001-
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09/17/2020 postreply
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