印象

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印象

 

如一束光

抑或是一个梦

轻轻飘进我的冥想

 

当一阵夏日炎风

止于一怀脱尘的澈冽

静谧的时空里

你我倾心相悦

 

愿为卿

穿越天荒

万年啊

可慢可长

 

你只心若止水

望去

一眸疏淡明畅

 

落落的是清尘

恋恋的容光

时而幽涩

时而激扬

 

。。。

。。。

 

Lily Impression

Such as a beam of light
Or a dream
Gently drifting into my meditation

a hot summer day
Stop at beyond life
the air is crisply cold
Quiet time and space
We smile at each other

Willing to be you
Travel through time
Thousands of years passed
Can be slow or long

Stay still like a pond of water
When I look deep into you
Your eyes are so desireless and glowing happily

Like clear fairy dust falling into my life
Such unforgettable moments
Sometimes silently sob
Sometimes fly with the wind

。。。

。。。

impression ( old version)

 

Such as a beam of light

Or a dream

Gently drifting into my meditation

 

a gust of wind

Stop at beyond life

the air is crisply cold

Quiet time and space

We smile at each other

 

Willing to be you

Travel through wild spaces and time

Thousands of years passed

Can be slow or long

 

Stay still like a pond of water

When I look deep into you

Your eyes are so desireless and glowing happily

 

Like clear dust falling into my life

Such unforgettable moments

Sometimes silently sob

Sometimes fly with the wind

 

。。。

。。。

:)))

:)))

 

 

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流殇好像和英文版里的time 含义有别,不match 。而且“穿越流觞”费解。 -道不远- 给 道不远 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 08/29/2019 postreply 08:08:34

感谢道远诗长临帖提宝贵意见。 改做穿越天荒~~~~~~~ -阿童木牧- 给 阿童木牧 发送悄悄话 阿童木牧 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/29/2019 postreply 10:57:58

一如既往的神奇美好 -北回归线的阳光- 给 北回归线的阳光 发送悄悄话 北回归线的阳光 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/29/2019 postreply 18:04:50

好诗 -千山我独行- 给 千山我独行 发送悄悄话 千山我独行 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/29/2019 postreply 18:55:38

你只心若止水 望去 一眸疏淡明畅。美! -斯人曰- 给 斯人曰 发送悄悄话 斯人曰 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/29/2019 postreply 19:16:51

感谢北诗人,千版和斯人姐雅临谬赞! 问好! -阿童木牧- 给 阿童木牧 发送悄悄话 阿童木牧 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/29/2019 postreply 22:55:39

好诗 ! -Meander001- 给 Meander001 发送悄悄话 Meander001 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/30/2019 postreply 04:17:37

赞!这印象,穿越万年,可慢可长... 欣赏! -闲者__- 给 闲者__ 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 08/30/2019 postreply 21:22:36

我想,她跟这一池碧莲的距离,是永远的,因为现实的美,是不太可能于梦幻之中造就的。 -秦照- 给 秦照 发送悄悄话 秦照 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/31/2019 postreply 08:36:08

这个,美得迷银哈~~~ 喜欢!问好阿童! HUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUG!~~~~ -遍野- 给 遍野 发送悄悄话 遍野 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/31/2019 postreply 11:12:49

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