【七律】球场青莲 (用韵 清泉水兄)
By Meander
一鉴方塘荷淡然, 球儿入水逗青莲。
熟男何怨出身地, 生客沉沙果岭边。
心境善和缘好事, 道场光范困如眠。
于雷声处撑孤伞, 翠色日[1]时纵火烟。
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[1] 翠色日~ Treason Day, 4th of July. Why is 4th of July called treason day?
【七律】球场青莲 (用韵 清泉水兄)
By Meander
一鉴方塘荷淡然, 球儿入水逗青莲。
熟男何怨出身地, 生客沉沙果岭边。
心境善和缘好事, 道场光范困如眠。
于雷声处撑孤伞, 翠色日[1]时纵火烟。
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[1] 翠色日~ Treason Day, 4th of July. Why is 4th of July called treason day?
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