?In Memory of Father

回答: 西江月。寄父亲karenkn2019-07-02 08:22:06

In Memory of Father

Translated by Albert Kung (July2, 2019)

 

last year that long grassy lawn

where parting call so painfully drawn

today, weakened soul in frozen dew

shocked in pain with passing blew 

 

dripping thoughts slowly aglow

happy news heavenly flow

ruminating Han Ko, my home town dream

passing time with passing gleam 

 

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欣赏!weakened soul,要斟酌,shocked in pain, 翻译的不够subtle -天朝玉- 给 天朝玉 发送悄悄话 天朝玉 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 07/04/2019 postreply 05:59:21

好的我告诉一下我的翻译者龚天茂先生 -karenkn- 给 karenkn 发送悄悄话 karenkn 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 07/05/2019 postreply 00:48:20

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