前面很好,若后四句精炼一下或更有余味。个人浅见,不怕笑话,百花齐放,互相鼓励和批评。
好诗欣赏!
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• 对,这首写的太快了点,还要改的 -千山我独行- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/20/2019 postreply 17:01:45
前面很好,若后四句精炼一下或更有余味。个人浅见,不怕笑话,百花齐放,互相鼓励和批评。
• 对,这首写的太快了点,还要改的 -千山我独行- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/20/2019 postreply 17:01:45
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