英译 杜甫 《望岳》

Looking at the Mountain Tai
 
By Du Fu

Ah, how does it look like, the Daizong mountain?
Its blueness extends to the lands of Qi and Lu yet not ending.
The Nature has made it collecting many of the God's beauties,
The darkness and brightness cut a line between night and morning.
My heart is agitating to the growing of many layers of clouds,
My eyes are wide open to see many returning birds.
Sooner or later I'll be on the very top of the mountain,
Take a look at other peaks that seem so small like mounds.

 

 

谢小谢诗友建议，改短点

Looking at the Mountain Tai
 
By Du Fu

Ah, how does it look like, the Daizong mountain?
Beyond the Qi and Lu, its blueness extends.
The Nature made it have the God's many beauties,
The dark and bright cut a line between dawns and nights.
My heart Agitates with growing layers of clouds,
My eyes open wide to spot returning birds.
Sooner or later I'll step on the mountain's top,
To view other peaks looking so small like mounds.

 

 

望岳

文/ 杜甫

岱宗夫如何，齐鲁青未了。

造化钟神秀，阴阳割昏晓。
荡胸生层云，决眦入归鸟。

会当凌绝顶，一览众山小。

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• 欣赏。但觉得就这首而言每行过长。 -中间小谢- ♂ (116 bytes) () 08/01/2017 postreply 12:58:59

• 缩短些了。谢谢小谢 -Yimusanfendi- ♂ (553 bytes) () 08/01/2017 postreply 21:04:59

• 学习！问好！～～～～～ -阿童木牧- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/01/2017 postreply 23:58:22