好意境！有一点需要修改一下: 平水韵中，春字是与韵脚同韵部，不宜用在非韵脚位置。问好！

来源: 斯人曰于 2017-04-27 13:49:36 [博客] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 本文已被阅读：次

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