【七絕】于春去处有雷鸣

【七絕】于春去处有雷鸣

文 / Meander

  于春去处有雷鸣[1],   (平平仄仄仄平平)

  向晚寻时听野曲。 (仄仄平平平仄仄)

  寂谧山林一洞天,   (仄仄平平仄仄平)

  茵茵果岭三枚玉。 (平平仄仄平平仄)

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[1]. 雷鸣 ~ 指第一号木击球响声。

 

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• 赞赏好诗! -前世无理- ♂ (52 bytes) () 04/15/2017 postreply 03:45:43

• +1 草上球，水中月？天上月？西沉日？外加Meander的眸子？ -Willie_USA- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/15/2017 postreply 05:33:34

• Yes, 玉~球 (back now)! -Meander001- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/15/2017 postreply 05:40:35

• Haha,why 3? -Willie_USA- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/15/2017 postreply 05:45:51

• Oooh, Threesome playing, 3 people, (1 ball one person). -Meander001- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/15/2017 postreply 08:14:26

• See,why not 2 balls for each one? -Willie_USA- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/15/2017 postreply 08:31:18

• That is governed by golf rules. -Meander001- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/15/2017 postreply 09:15:11

• Every flight/group allows maximum 4 people playing, but -Meander001- ♂ (70 bytes) () 04/15/2017 postreply 09:26:39

• threesome, twosome, or single is OK depending on availability. -Meander001- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/15/2017 postreply 09:29:02

• Thanks,bro. -Willie_USA- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/15/2017 postreply 10:11:51

• ~~深谢 Willie 兄雅临垂赏！ -Meander001- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/15/2017 postreply 17:52:23

• ~@@ 深谢前世无理兄雅临和鼓励! -Meander001- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/15/2017 postreply 17:32:36

• 正格对仗好! -岁寒松柏- ♂ (97 bytes) () 04/15/2017 postreply 04:44:37

• 深谢岁寒兄垂赏鼓励！ -Meander001- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/15/2017 postreply 17:41:52

• 最后一句似乎意犹未尽～ -momo_sharon- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/15/2017 postreply 06:58:29

• 深谢momo 君, 容我再想想。 -Meander001- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/15/2017 postreply 17:50:23

• 001兄好诗，三枚玉！好联想。 -Once-always- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/15/2017 postreply 08:06:30

• 深谢Once MM 垂赏鼓励！ -Meander001- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/15/2017 postreply 17:42:51

• 三枚玉！！欣赏M兄美诗！ -荷花清香- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/15/2017 postreply 12:02:44

• 深谢沁文 荷花君谬赞鼓励! -Meander001- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/15/2017 postreply 17:41:04

• 光打雷不下雨，继续玩玉：） -哈瑞- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/15/2017 postreply 12:19:25

• 谢谢哈雷兄雅临, 哈哈, 有哈雷当然打雷了! 问好兄! -Meander001- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/15/2017 postreply 17:46:54

• 欣赏 -closeby- ♂ (80 bytes) () 04/15/2017 postreply 14:11:38

• +1 -乐者- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/15/2017 postreply 16:40:22

• 谢 乐者兄雅临和鼓励! -Meander001- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/15/2017 postreply 17:31:18

• 谢谢近兄雅临。"雷鸣" 指击球的响声。第一号木击球声也够大的。这里雷鸣声当然有夸张了。 -Meander001- ♂ (144 bytes) () 04/15/2017 postreply 17:29:36

• 野曲指球场的鸟鸣鹿鸣。祝周末愉快! -Meander001- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/15/2017 postreply 18:08:42

• 谢、赞 美安兄 妙和 。。。挥洒惬意莫如君 。。。春安、周末愉快。 -沁文----古来客- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/15/2017 postreply 17:18:20

• 深谢沁文兄垂赏鼓励！周末愉快! -Meander001- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/15/2017 postreply 17:44:25