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• 谢谢清泉兄不吝赐教!亦觉裹字欠妥,溅字甚好,已改。但苟认为浑字此处做仄韵与新韵和习惯略有不谐,故还保留拙作原字。再次感谢清泉兄! -作业本- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/01/2017 postreply 00:46:14
• 谢谢清泉兄不吝赐教!亦觉裹字欠妥,溅字甚好,已改。但苟认为浑字此处做仄韵与新韵和习惯略有不谐,故还保留拙作原字。再次感谢清泉兄! -作业本- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/01/2017 postreply 00:46:14
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