To 不厌兄 , My second Poem, third sentence should be changed to

来源: Meander001 于 2017-02-15 10:46:24 [] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 阅读数 : (428 bytes)
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 My second Poem, third sentence should be changed from " 长安城郭以然在"  to  "长安城郭依然在,". The current version has been changed while you are still using the initial Version. Thanks.

Meander.

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