塑成不留名,
难成扬万里。
小技可雕虫,
大艺仍伤身。
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谢谢朋友赏读拙作和同吟。朋友的诗很自由,但如果作近体诗加上一些格律会更上口,个见。
-作业本-
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09/28/2016 postreply
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读下我昨天作新诗“无归”
-胡华泠-
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