嘻嘻，鳅儿大师是才女，阿童可是柴童哈！ 被一位专家批评轻狂，竟敢胡翻 语言大师 Robert Frost 的作品，阿童汗颜。。。

试改这两句：  it 这里指的是荒野。。。：））） Smother 是指被大雪覆盖住的意思。 （不是窒息）

The woods around it have it--it is theirs.

All animals are smothered in their lairs.

远方环绕的林木紧紧拥着荒原

荒原属于他们

那静静被白雪覆盖了巢穴 酣睡的动物们

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改诗哈！：）））））

Desert Places 
原野
by Robert Frost  弗罗斯特

Snow falling and night falling fast, oh, fast
In a field I looked into going past,
And the ground almost covered smooth in snow,
But a few weeds and stubble showing last.

雪轻轻的飘落

夜幕却蓦然沉降，沉降
我在原野上回望
土地被白茫茫的大雪覆盖平整
偶尔看见一两丛枯萎的野草花

The woods around it have it--it is theirs.
All animals are smothered in their lairs.
I am too absent-spirited to count;
The loneliness includes me unawares.

远方环绕的林木紧拥着荒原

荒原属于他们

那静静被白雪覆盖了巢穴 酣睡的动物们

我像一缕若无的游息

孤寂使我迷失

 

And lonely as it is that loneliness
Will be more lonely ere it will be less--
A blanker whiteness of benighted snow
With no expression, nothing to express.

孤独本身就像那永恒的寂寞
永远不会改变分毫
白茫茫夜幕下的雪野呀
哪里我可以听见一点点声音 哪怕只有一点点？

 

They cannot scare me with their empty spaces
Between stars--on stars where no human race is.
I have it in me so much nearer home
To scare myself with my own desert places.

不用说那遥远宇宙

星于星之间  杳无人烟的荒漠空间会吓住我

其实就在我的家园 在内心里

我早已被一片无尽的荒漠

震慑

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