You left me – Sire – two Legacies –（试译，与颤音诗友共勉）

You left me – Sire – two Legacies – (713) 

BY EMILY DICKINSON

 

You left me – Sire – two Legacies –

A Legacy of Love

A Heavenly Father would suffice

Had He the offer of –

 

You left me Boundaries of Pain –

Capacious as the Sea –

Between Eternity and Time –

Your Consciousness – and me –

 

你遗留给我，阁下，两笔财富--

一笔是爱的财富

倘若天父得此

他必定一样满足

 

你留给我痛苦的边际--

好像海洋一般宽阔--

在永恒与瞬时之间--

你的知觉--和我--

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• 欣赏一亩兄好译，祝新春快乐！ -寒砚- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/05/2016 postreply 06:56:35

• 好诗好译，拜读得益~~~一兄过年好！ -庞士清- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/05/2016 postreply 13:42:22

• 欣赏好译。久不见，问好~ -Eragon- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/06/2016 postreply 07:58:06

• ?兄久不见甚念。祝春节快乐，万事如意！ -Yimusanfendi- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/06/2016 postreply 08:22:58