You left me – Sire – two Legacies – (713) BY EMILY DICKINSON 翻译

在读 when breath becomes air， 后记引用了这首诗， 有谁知道中文的译本吗？ 谢谢。 我试一下， 丢块砖头。 

You left me – Sire – two Legacies – (713)

 

BY EMILY DICKINSON

 

You left me – Sire – two Legacies –

A Legacy of Love

A Heavenly Father would suffice

Had He the offer of –

 

You left me Boundaries of Pain –

Capacious as the Sea –

Between Eternity and Time –

Your Consciousness – and me –

 

馨柔的你, 遗留我, 两重

一重不息的爱

若予天父

他亦感慨

 

一重无际的痛

似海般深广

在恒瞬之间 

君心与我依傍

所有跟帖： 

• 译了一下，见楼上 -Yimusanfendi- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/04/2016 postreply 21:06:03

• 译得挺好的。 -Yimusanfendi- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/04/2016 postreply 21:20:35

• 谢谢你的鼓励， 我也喜欢你的， 更忠实原文些 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/04/2016 postreply 21:49:48

• 欣赏好译，新春快乐！ -寒砚- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/05/2016 postreply 06:54:11