谢谢yuanxiang诗友的点评。这个韵脚能用上的字不多，首联是感觉有点接近，容我仔细斟酌，看能否找到更好的表达方式。

来源: momo_sharon 于 2015-12-20 18:16:31 [博客] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 本文已被阅读：次

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