[蝶恋花] 惜春
风浅柳深晨色早,
桃逝樱消,
几簇红鹃好。
踏露挥锄清杂草,
落英残瓣箕中扫。
转瞬一年春又老,
惜玉怜香,
惟恐花枝倒。
笑怪无端空自恼,
且斟竹酒填诗稿。
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赞楼主精益求精的精神!四稿果然胜过前稿!落英残瓣其实意思是一样的,也许改成落英片片箕中扫,更形象些。
-曲未平-
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