真好!语法似稍有点小问题,“ sits” 似应为“sitting"或“set"(with 不能接一个完整的句子); “ roar

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"to erase with" or "to erase, with..." 或者去掉“with"

" clean breeze blowing gently outside"

英语俺是二百五,诗歌里的更是不懂,说错了还望阿童海涵!