屋為仄聲，是入聲字。另“上疆場劍寒光”不工整，像對仗但不成對，最好能斟酌一下。

来源: bi-elliptic 于 2014-03-30 18:37:32 [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 本文已被阅读：次

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屋為仄聲，是入聲字。另“上疆場 劍寒光”不工整，像對仗但不成對，最好能斟酌一下。