感觉“幽”与“盈”矛盾，转句与结句有重叠，不若写春天来临比再写花红有意境。

来源: chunfengfeng 于 2014-02-15 11:18:44 [博客] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 本文已被阅读：次

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