庭草无人随意绿,江南柳系小风筝。云归几处天涯路,燕去何时膝下情?
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• 回复:哈哈....又把江南给卷进来了. 如果改作: 江南有柳系风筝 好不好? -梦江南_- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/24/2014 postreply 18:54:29
• 好,不过没关系。后两句对仗应该也可以。~~~ -遍野- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/24/2014 postreply 20:20:27
• 回复:哈哈....又把江南给卷进来了. 如果改作: 江南有柳系风筝 好不好? -梦江南_- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/24/2014 postreply 18:54:29
• 好,不过没关系。后两句对仗应该也可以。~~~ -遍野- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/24/2014 postreply 20:20:27
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