回复：叶芝这首我也喜欢。 The Coming Of Wisdom With Time 我想译成 积时成智。

来源: 于 2013-11-06 14:15:15 [博客] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 本文已被阅读：次


看来把swayed理解成“摇落”比“摇晃”更美些。

我的改成

枝叶繁茂根唯一； THOUGH leaves are many, the root is one;
经由扯谎少无忌   Through all the lying days of my youth
摇尽花叶阳光披； I swayed my leaves and flowers in the sun;
今我萎蔫成真理。 Now I may wither into the truth.