好诗好字画!但这一首律里的两个“倚”字同义有点犯忌了。
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• good catch,还是三仄 -*东篱*- ♂ (388 bytes) () 10/30/2013 postreply 06:52:40
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• good catch,还是三仄 -*东篱*- ♂ (388 bytes) () 10/30/2013 postreply 06:52:40
• 回复:good catch,还是三仄 -*东篱*- ♂ (1909 bytes) () 10/30/2013 postreply 07:30:01