
【忆江南】游子梦
江南好
杏雨化春风
拂醒天涯游子梦
兰舟野渡水流东
极目送飞鸿
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兰舟野渡水流东,极目送飞鸿. -- 佳句!喜欢!~~
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08/18/2013 postreply
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第三句还可以改一下,提到楼上。
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08/18/2013 postreply
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多谢万师喜欢! 江南啊,每想都很美! 图是阿童写完后找到的,万师的诗更贴切!
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